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Saturday, July 9, 2011

Sunrise

This is a poem I wrote a year and a half ago. It's not really inspired by anything, just something I thought up.

SUNRISE

Coldness, so cold
Darkness everywhere
Blackness of the night

Hold me closer
Don't let go
Watch the sun come up

Everything's grey
Nothing moves
Lifeless

Hold me closer
Don't let go
Watch the sun come up

First light shines out
Dawn chorus
Listen to the birds

Hold me closer
Don't let go
Watch the sun come up

Pink and purple
Orange and red
Sunrise

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated!